writing

we have been learning how to write in third person:

Mirror writing Write in third person By Tava Tyrell

The tired girl looking back at me seems very familiar. Her eyes are as dark as an eclipse that covered the sun with the white sky floating by behind it. The shape of her eyes is like a football and every time she blinks the football disappears. Her eyelashes thin and small are like small prickles that will prick you. She looks at her nose and it looks like she has two little dark caves as nostrils that little green monsters live in with slimy skin. Her mouth is like a pink banana waiting to be peeled. When you peel her mouth open you can see beautiful white shaped pearls as her teeth and a big pink strawberry as her tongue. She looks at her skin and it is a chocolate-brown colour. Her skin peels very easily like petals falling off a beautiful flower. She looks at her hair, its not straight like a horses hair and its not curly like worms when they squirm around in the dirt, it’s like a tree, the leaves go their own way.

She was born in the year 1998 in the Waikato Hospital and ever since she was born she has had crazy adventures. Like the time she jumped to the monkey bars but missed fell on the ground and broke her arm. She went to Hospital and the doctor filled her up with laughing gas like stuffing a chicken for Christmas dinner. Then the doctor tried to push her bone back to normal but she started crying like a hose you couldn’t turn off. But she ended up getting a cast. She gets annoyed very easily by any one especially her older brother when she’s reading, doing homework, and doing chores. She doesn’t like it when the man across the road lets out his dog and then chases her down the road. She also doesn’t like it when her sneaky little cousins take her gold necklaces’ and don’t return them. One of her hobbies is singing she sings forever it gets so annoying. She likes to play rugby with her family she got tackled by her older brother and ended up with a long cut on her foot. She loves to dance in competitively and she won 500 dollars in a competition with her family. The best thing she loves to do is hang out with her family and do secret Santa. In the future she would like to travel the world and be a wonderful and fantastic singer and actor. And if she doesn’t succeed she would like to be a coach for a professional girl’s rugby team or a teacher. She loves her friends and treats them like her family. She is kind to her friends and cares for them to. They treat her the same and are really respectful. She will stand up for them when ever they are in trouble and will make sure they don’t get hurt and she’s sure they would do the same. She goes to Fairfield Intermediate and tries really hard to make a good first impression with anyone she meets. Her favourite subject in school is handwriting because she can write really beautifully but needs to work on slope. She likes lunchtime because she can spend more time with her friends and feel the breeze like falling down the Fear fall at Rainbows End. As I walk tiredly away from the glass mirror I look back and say “ man I’m going to sleep early tomorrow”. The end  we have been learning how to write poetry

the old rusty shed

In the old rusty death trap no life is around standing steady, not one sound

as the sun starts rising on the bare dead trees morning mist comes as it please

no life on land just dirt and holes but one flower stands near old wooden poles

dark wooden windows no shadow in sight if you come knocking you'll leave with a fright

its long wooden hands attached to the trees standing steady, swaying freely

By: Tava, Eliot, Amelia, Nick